She

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Friday, 18-Mar-2005 23:51:58

What she feels she doesn't know,
but she thinks she likes it, though;
visions dance inside her mind
as she sleeps in bed at night.

What she feels she can't explain;
there aren't enough words in her brain,
and her emotions she must strain,
for she knows not what they may contain.

What she feels she can't escape;
she's haunted by that lovely face,
and as her heart begins to race,
she longs to find that lovely place.

What she feels confuses her;
at night she tosses, and she turns,
and sometimes, her eyes even burn,
for in her mind it always churns.

What she feels will she discern?
She does not know just where to turn.
Will she once again be burned
and buried deep among the ferns?
And again it begins; will she ever learn?!

Post 2 by Happy Little Faith (One day closer to eternity! Wahoooooooo!) on Friday, 18-Mar-2005 23:55:55

Wo. That sinds shivers up the spine. Great job!

Post 3 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Saturday, 19-Mar-2005 9:04:57

billiant! you are an emerging talent

Post 4 by season (the invisible soul) on Monday, 21-Mar-2005 5:40:11

great job girl. hugs

Post 5 by chelslicious (like it or not, I'm gonna say what I mean. all the time.) on Monday, 18-Apr-2005 22:00:49

wow, mell did you write that?

Post 6 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Monday, 18-Apr-2005 22:12:54

Yes, I wrote that. Thanks for the comments y'all.

Post 7 by saiyan4414 (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Tuesday, 19-Apr-2005 6:18:56

Hey sis great writing. Your friend Tony.